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    I need a song title!

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    Post  Zeeri on Wed Apr 20, 2011 1:28 am

    So, I've been working on a new song about a family member who forces themselves out of the house and to live on the street, feeling unwanted.

    In this song it's expressed how long it seems and how the street-living one feels towards the singer. It may make no sense, but all I want atm is a title.

    So read the lyrics, and I might post up the lyrics with chords / notes if anyone wants to play it or sing it.

    Lyrics:

    Do you feel the rain,
    Beating on your face,
    But as you sit there by the door on the other side,
    Your thoughts are washed away.
    In the burning flames,
    Of yesterdays pain,
    Your thoughts return with the sight of me,
    Into your fate.

    But you sit here all day watching time go by,
    You throw your head up into the sky.
    The sun shines bright and the rain falls down,
    But your still outside in the empty town.

    What will we ever ever do with you,
    Time flies by-i-i-i-i it’s true.
    Get inside before the plague gets to spread,
    From the blood-stricken brain within your head.
    X2

    The town’s torn,
    Undeath has been born,
    But you still sit there by the door on the other side,
    Your life will be destroyed.
    In the burning flames,
    Of yesterdays plague,
    Your mind blazes with the thought of me,
    Controlling your fate.

    But the sun slowly sets as the day goes by,
    You throw your hands up into the sky.
    Your life is a ruin and your death is a wish,
    As you wait for your fate as your late night dish.

    What will we ever ever do with you,
    Time flies by-i-i-i-i it’s true.
    Get inside before the plague gets to spread,
    From the blood-stricken brain within your head.
    X2

    (Piano solo)

    But the sun slowly sets as the day goes by,
    You throw your hands up into the sky.
    Your life is a ruin and your death is a wish,
    As you wait for your fate as your late night dish

    What will we ever ever do with you,
    Time flies by-i-i-i-i it’s true.
    Get inside before the plague gets to spread,
    From the blood-stricken brain within your head.
    X2


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    Post  Skye on Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:02 am

    Safety Dance!

    Well they don't dance
    and if they don't dance
    then they're, no friends of mine!

    Seriously though just think of a bleak sounding noun and add a bleak sounding adjective like... shattered rain. Or you just name it after the person who the song is based on. They're both really overused premises but why re-write a hit?
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    Post  Zeeri on Wed Apr 20, 2011 4:17 pm

    Skye, you helped me a lot there ;p I've got a few ideas. 'Your Clear Fate',
    'Shattered Dreams', 'Death from the Rain'. I'm not too sure. But if you guys want the chords / notes of the song, I'll be glad to give it a go.

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